Hey! Glad you liked it. I really worked on implementing your suggestions and used your critique from my previous writing to tighten things up. I definitely see how my writing has improved a ton (my wife’s an English lit major and likes the way I’ve been writing recently), thanks to you. I referenced the caffeine in the last few sentences at bottom(yeah I know-not enough right?) & tried to tie in steroids in with one of the memory mnemonics included in the method... I would have done more with the idea but was trying to keep the word count close to 250 as possible... oh btw Hemingway Editor is god! Hemingway was slapping my MacBook Air off the desk each time I ran on too long... loving #dolphinschool