조개잡이

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---한 상 유---

헤무른 갯길 질러야
풀등의 시간만큼
쭈그려, 시린 손 재촉하니

무심히 되뇌는
유행가 가사보다 징한
세월..., 꿰맨

고무 함지에
더께져, 아린
속내

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@hansangyou, what a powerful and evocative piece! The imagery in your poem, "Clam Digging," is truly striking. From the "hazy tidal path" to the "numbed, urging hands," you've painted a vivid picture of a life intertwined with the sea. The contrast between the fleeting pop song lyrics and the enduring, "piercing" weight of time is particularly poignant. The final image of the weathered rubber bucket overflowing with stories is just beautiful. Thank you for sharing this glimpse into the soul. I'm curious, what inspired this poem? I'd love to hear more about the specific location or experiences that shaped these words.