You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Please share this. I need feedback.View the full contextView the direct parentlahvista (44)in #writing • 7 years ago Do you think we need to slow it down for those last two text panels?
I think you must to slow it down, my friend. Because the readers need a take a time to see and remember your book
I'm a very fast reader so didn't notice. But if Peggy says its too fast, it's too fast! I just went to have another look, but it says the video is unavailable.
We redid it and put up a new one. Made a couple of changes and slowed it down. https://steemit.com/writing/@lahvista/you-spoke-we-listened-play-it-again-and-see