You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Please share this. I need feedback.View the full contextkiwideb (67)in #writing • 7 years ago Yep, looks good to me too (as someone who has read and loved the book)
Do you think we need to slow it down for those last two text panels?
I think you must to slow it down, my friend. Because the readers need a take a time to see and remember your book
I'm a very fast reader so didn't notice. But if Peggy says its too fast, it's too fast! I just went to have another look, but it says the video is unavailable.
We redid it and put up a new one. Made a couple of changes and slowed it down. https://steemit.com/writing/@lahvista/you-spoke-we-listened-play-it-again-and-see