[Original Novel] Pressure 3: Beautiful Corpse, Part 14 (the finale!)

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Vivian, with great effort, lifted the tip of the jackhammer to the porthole. She met Olivia’s gaze with a wide, deranged grin on her face. The window behind her now shone radiant blue instead of the familiar black. Vivian faltered. a look of fear and anger in her eyes. One of her eyes burst, a waterfall of black liquid seeping out of her empty socket. She pawed at her bloody face with hands now mangled by burst veins. She dropped the jackhammer and screamed.

“That’d be us right now if not for the chamber. We’re still pressurized to depth.” One of the engineers was now beside her, also peering through the small window. She remembered the burst window a few levels down. The rapid ascent was killing them. “Right now every cell in their body is coming apart. Four atmos will pack a lot of dissolved nitrogen in the blood and soft tissues. All of which just came out in the span of a couple minutes.” It was sobering, and Olivia very briefly felt sorry for Vivian.

Not the Vivian out there, disintegrating into bloody pulp as expanding bubbles of gas shredded her cells. The Vivian she’d known for those first few weeks aboard the Belusarius. How easily humanity can be lost. And how difficult to restore. The rest of the fabricants lay motionless around her, blood fizzing furiously from their wounds like a shaken soda.

The module lurched as it breached the surface, bobbing up and down like a buoy. The window on the far wall now admitted an intensely welcome ray of sunlight, illuminating a circular patch of the floor. It was an agonizing twenty more hours in the chamber until it was safe to emerge. The engineers pulled down a ladder and opened an emergency hatch in the top half of the domed ceiling. Cold, salty air rushed in.

“Smell that! Oh sweet fuck I’ve never smelled anything so wonderful!” She understood his delirium the moment she felt sunlight on her skin. The rest busily scrambled up the ladder and through the hatch, to stand on the top of the module in the open air. Olivia turned to see ‘Helen’ sitting up, eyes open.

It was a tense few seconds before she spoke. “Olivia? Where are we. I can’t remember...They took me from the hospital. Then there was a dark room. It was loud and smelled terrible. I couldn’t move, couldn’t think. How did you…” Olivia was at her side in a heartbeat, arms around her neck.

Violet laughed. “You’re crushing me. This is real, isn’t it? The outside. You really did it, didn’t you.” Tears welled up in Olivia’s eyes, and her lower lip quivered. “You wanna explain to me why I have red hair?” Olivia now finally bawled, overcome with relief and resumed hugging Violet over her protestations. It was the happiest she’d ever been.

“And the happiest she’ll ever be” spoke a booming voice which echoed down the concrete shaft. In one of the cages lining the rim, Olivia stood tearfully embracing a phantom shaped like Violet. The real Violet stood just outside, opening the next cage over. The booming voice once again issued forth. “That makes three, little one. I return your father to you.”


The End.

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Poor Violet, she had two, she could have made it three, so close to eternal happiness for her, but nope helen only needed one more also. helen won the race, never underestimate the father daughter binds.

Violet didn't want eternal communion with the creature. She wanted her father back, and to escape. You can find out what happened to her after that in Under the Floorboards.

"The window on the far wall now admitted an intensely welcome ray of sunlight, illuminating a circular patch of the floor." Then alexbeyman floated from the sky to destroy the world he built. His all might rath will be unmatched.

Holy crap. What a mindfuck this novel has been from start to finish. Necrophilia, zombies, a Black Pool giant stuck in a trench under the sea? Loved every moment of it, especially the kick in the teeth with that final twist. Great writing as usual Mr Beyman.

Oh... I see the finale... the end... so do you have more Novels or so? =)

Yes, you've missed most of them. I have over 70 that I've posted here bit by bit over the past year.

Wow, that's awesome - I have a lot to read! :D It's something complicated to find past content on Steemit, somehow I miss a good overview on Steemit.

What was so amazing about this novel was how much Olivia had to go through. Study about the crew’s dreams was her profession on the sub of prisoners. In reality or I would say “in dreams” she turned in to patient herself, getting trapped in the hallucinations and dreams caused but the creature, getting cut into small pieces and then being put together using someone else’s body parts... At one point she lost so many people close to her including James to this creature, the only redemption for her would be to save Violet...she did, including Vivian and Helen. Violet laughed. “You’re crushing me. This is real, isn’t it? The outside. You really did it, didn’t you.” Tears welled up in Olivia’s eyes, and her lower lip quivered...
This novel was undoubtedly the best of the three and I really enjoyed reading it.

Nooooo. I knew it was nearing the end, damn.
That trilogy was a great horror story.

Way to go, way to go. Happy three undead family in the end. Can't possibly end better!

I don't think you understood the ending. Olivia is trapped in an illusion. Violet sold her out to the creature to get her father back.

The thing about being stupid is when you are not smart enough to understand something and you can interpret it the way you like. So I'm stupid and I almost got a happy ending! But now I feel sad after you opened me the truth behind the ending.

Its very interesting, awesome writing i appereciate your effoert keep it up thanks for sharing i wish you all the best

Your writting content is so good And interesting I love it And just wait for your upcoming post

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well done