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RE: The Fountain Of A Thousand Stories - La fontana dalle mille storie [ENG-ITA freewrite]

in #story-300words7 years ago

This story has a very nice even flow, sort of like a narration at the end of a much longer trail of events. For me, it was kind of like the song/ballad at the end of an American Western movie as the main character rides off slowly into the sunset. 🤠 😎 👍

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Interesting comment.. i would have never thought of it like this Deacon. It just confirms that what you write lives in the eyes of the reader.