this tune, like your last comes with some real emotion. you got good happy sad feels happing. a lot of hope. I like this about this tune. i could see this in a movie perhaps.but as of right now it is a background track for a film. this can grow more i believe. i think the groove is so good, that a couple more sessions and you with start to find new lawyers and a bit more originality. it is weird for me to say this, as it goes against a lot of what i would normally say about a brake of a fill, but i really wanna hear that snare drum roll go on for a long bit, and swell and grow back into a big drop. lets have another instruments lawyer up! and perhaps some strange textures to bounce around. little ghostly creature animals making cute, spacey, echo sounds. put the track in an environment perhaps. maybe the jungle. give it some air! make this baby breath. it might not be bad to have a moment where we are almost all only drum sounds. perhaps the drums get a section and you twisted and trip them up a bit for some fun. if you did this, that snare drum roll could maybe build out of there. like i said love the emotion! and from me, i am always gonna scream on about more original sounding music from all of us is a must! lets get after it, take risk, and be ourselves! not to say you are not. i am always pushing myself and the others around me for more of the such! great track!!