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RE: SML Feedback Contest Round Three Starts Now.

Here's my entry into this weeks contest. Thanks again to all the producers for their feedback and for listening in the previous weeks.

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When you know how to touch someone elses soul,you definitely know how to pour out your soul,because only soul touch soul..i hear creativity,i hear relativity,i hear understanding of sounds,i hear the passion in your production..you must love this work,cuz i love it and am sure many others do.. You gave us the chills cuz even you felt it,you connected us to what you felt,and thats a true quality of a producer..beautiful sound mahn, i just started production newly,so i wish to learn a lot from you if possible,i am following you already..i hope you can check out some of my work too and give me your candid opinion. Thanks for sharing this beautiful sound again mahn. Weldon

Wow, thanks! Really appreciate it. I'll check out some of your stuff today and do my best to give feedback. I'm usually more into just enjoying the melodies of track.. Finding where the mix can be improved is not my strong point but I'll do my best where I can to help.

Thank you mahn. Your work is an inspiration to me really,am honored.

this tune, like your last comes with some real emotion. you got good happy sad feels happing. a lot of hope. I like this about this tune. i could see this in a movie perhaps.but as of right now it is a background track for a film. this can grow more i believe. i think the groove is so good, that a couple more sessions and you with start to find new lawyers and a bit more originality. it is weird for me to say this, as it goes against a lot of what i would normally say about a brake of a fill, but i really wanna hear that snare drum roll go on for a long bit, and swell and grow back into a big drop. lets have another instruments lawyer up! and perhaps some strange textures to bounce around. little ghostly creature animals making cute, spacey, echo sounds. put the track in an environment perhaps. maybe the jungle. give it some air! make this baby breath. it might not be bad to have a moment where we are almost all only drum sounds. perhaps the drums get a section and you twisted and trip them up a bit for some fun. if you did this, that snare drum roll could maybe build out of there. like i said love the emotion! and from me, i am always gonna scream on about more original sounding music from all of us is a must! lets get after it, take risk, and be ourselves! not to say you are not. i am always pushing myself and the others around me for more of the such! great track!!

Thanks for your feedback, appreciate it

Absolutely my style mate! The beginning reminds me the infamous 'Glorious Morning'. Amazing beat is following. Well done! It's my first time on this contest where I just can't find anything to criticize.

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I wish I reach this level by the end of the year. Would you mind sharing what software you use?

Thanks so much! Really glad you like it. I use logic pro x to make all my music. Thanks for listening

Interesting. It seems as the main Fruity Loops competitor for Mac.

yes, I think Logic is the most popular music software on mac as far as I know. I actually started production years ago using fruity loops but I could never quite get the hang of it as easy as Logic

I see. I've always used Fruity Loops. Could try Logic after your words though.

I love the chill vibe in it and production is on the point. It kinda reminds me of this song which I really like (Yung Lean - Kyoto). Looking forward to more of your music ;)


Keep up the good work ;)

Wow, thanks so much! Really appreciate that. I really loved your track "Miles" in last weeks challenge. Hearing the production is on point from someone who can produce something that good is awesome! I'm at a friends house now but I'll get a listen to your entry for this week in the next day or two. Looking forward to hearing it.

Thank you man so much ;)

Btw. I made new contest for music production, feel free to enter if you are in the mood ;)


https://steemit.com/chordchallange/@antminer/chordchallange-1-make-something-from-this-chord-progression-and-win-steem


Blessings

Thanks for the heads up, I'll have a look now

I wasn't quite sure what to expect from the title of the track, but after reading the description on SoundCloud it started to make sense...and the result is pretty great! I'm a big fan of tracks that build to a sort of climax and you've definitely got that down. That's probably my favorite thing about the track. The drums in a way are a completely different genre (almost like a trap beat) than the instrumental orchestral vibe, but they work very well together. I would have liked a bit more variation in the drums, but that's just my personal taste. I do feel that somehow the track could use a bass, like a bassy synth or something like that. Now the lows are mainly just consisting of the kicks. I feel with a deep bass added, the track could have even more of an impact. Anyway, overall I think it's a great track, so well done!

Thanks for listening and for your feedback. I never thought of adding a bass. Might look into it for sure. It was originally just an orchestral track I made but now it's being made into a hiphop track that's mixed with orchestral music. There are gonna be vocals added over it at some point in the coming weeks all going well. Thanks again

Cool! I'm looking forward to hearing the end result!