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RE: 🎤 STEEMIT RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #9 SUBMISSION THREAD - WHO WILL TAKE THE CROWN?? 🎧
pocket full of lettuce smoking on that seaweed/Im a vegetar(i)an nah i dont do beef/im more into bleu cheese keep knots like my shoestrings/ yall talk we do things tune into the new thing/pudding from me proving put in work while im cruising/strap my bodyguard let her sing Whitney Houston/"I will always love ya I will never judge ya/ but if u threaten mine u a shot mf'er/watching for the ops watching for the bots/cuz they gon turn into sentinels & do us worst than the cops/reaching for the pinnacle thats going to the top/and still take my losses like a man i never flop never dat/out them streets shit was getting hot mane/on to the next hustle it dont stop mane/godspeed in my jesus shuttle cuz he got game/whats da worth of a street nga on the blockchain
So laid-back, packed with knowledge, dope style broseph!
''whats da worth of a street nga on the blockchain''
you ended your verse so smoothly with that one, damn, really digged that
Thanks for the love homie! im humbled
This is a real verse. Liked how you lace your perspective through the verse and keep it personal. Nice flow, and you had a couple cool punchlines in there too.
Liked this:
out them streets shit was getting hot mane
on to the next hustle it dont stop mane
godspeed in my jesus shuttle cuz he got game
whats da worth of a street nga on the blockchain
Hit me back with some feed if you have time.
Thanks 4 the feedback bro!! keeping it personal the easiest way to go when writing, for me anyway lol...but yea i did make a point to make that verse gel together, glad u peeped it!!
You was picking my brain here man.
watching for the ops watching for the bots/cuz they gon turn into sentinels & do us worst than the cops
That's real, love the whole thing tho
Preciate it bro...yea the direction things moving in kinda scary
Pre-Matrix and Terminator visions...
precisely...
haha yeah that's a dope line
"out them streets shit was getting hot mane/on to the next hustle it dont stop mane/godspeed in my jesus shuttle cuz he got game/whats da worth of a street nga on the blockchain" bro you said a mouth full with that line and it will go over a lot of people head. Keep doing what you do my G. @opinizeunltd
thanks for the love homie! glad u caught it...
i like your style man..
preciate it bro