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RE: 🎤 STEEMIT RAP CHALLENGE WEEK #9 SUBMISSION THREAD - WHO WILL TAKE THE CROWN?? 🎧
This is a real verse. Liked how you lace your perspective through the verse and keep it personal. Nice flow, and you had a couple cool punchlines in there too.
Liked this:
out them streets shit was getting hot mane
on to the next hustle it dont stop mane
godspeed in my jesus shuttle cuz he got game
whats da worth of a street nga on the blockchain
Hit me back with some feed if you have time.
Thanks 4 the feedback bro!! keeping it personal the easiest way to go when writing, for me anyway lol...but yea i did make a point to make that verse gel together, glad u peeped it!!