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Yeah, the contest was about a short introduction of how you would like your goverment organized. The thing about Goverments is that there are many aspects you would need to consider and it would be loudricous one person could draw up an entire goverment plan. But if there are any aspects, that I should shed light upon, feel free to ask. :D

Well, I think that your goverment lacks some kind of spice, a core that makes it function differently. Your idea has not enough revolutionaizing in it. I feel that it is not realy going to lead to much of a change as some of those points you made have been already kind of being in use whithout bringing that hoped outcome.

Mhh I kinda agree and when I was younger revolution to something like communism or anything other than capitalsim sounded pretty sweet. But I realized some time ago, that radical change won't work, because people don't like change. Therefore I decided to look at specific problem and try to better them, while applying the above general principal to evalute my ideas.

Revolution of communisms has gone long ago. What I mean is that I think the very core must be changed to be able to make change. This core does not have to be more than a change in the idea for what the system works! That helped me to introduce my own goverment, that may appear as not actually changing anything.