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RE: Escribo versiones de microrrelatos || I write versions of micro stories
A master at work :)
You’ve handled this task in such a commanding way.
"Dreams"
The set designer of dreams soon tires and finishes his work in any case.
Wow. That was captivating! Although, I must admit, I would love a little more than just that. Hahaha. The way you’ve narrated it makes me want to read further. Since it's a microstory, I know that won't be possible here, but maybe in another publication, I might have the pleasure of reading a longer version. Don't forget to tag me when that happens!
Honestly, I don’t have any suggestions or areas of improvement for you. If I tried, it would feel forced. So yeah...
Your work is a fine piece of literature, and I wouldn’t dare touch it!
Regards.
Gracias, amiga, por sus agradables comentarios. Intentamos siempre hacer lo mejor que podamos, sobre todo en estas tareas cuyos desafíos cada vez son más exigentes, lo cual nos agrada. Ya tendremos alguna oportunidad de escribir algo de mayor extensión, aunque si lo vemos bien, el sentido de algunos microrrelatos es intenso y extenso. Un gran saludo.
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