Allow me to give you a tip.

• You should always use images on your post. It will not only give beauty but will also enhance your topic.
• Break your post into paragraphs and avoid one long sentence.
• If you will use an image that is not yours, use this tool https://steemitcuration.appspot.com/imageformat to properly format it. Just paste the image url in the given box and click format and copy the markdown code and paste it in your post.

Thank you.