Hello rendicion123, welcome to steemit. There are a lot of nice and friendly people on steemit as you will learn in time, there are also some that are not so nice as you will learn that in time also. This is likely to be a little on the long side.

I work with a few different groups on steemit. The first one is @newbieresteemday. It was a group formed to help new users get a leg up on steemit. They/we use the tag #newbieresteemday. If you see that tag, or a post from @newbieresteemday, then you need not worry about asking any member for help in understanding something, we as a group or individual will not be offended, even if the question is off topic of the post. If/when you become familiar with discord chat groups we also have one of those. We have a promote yourself dropbox, and I and a few others use that to go around and leave a vote and comment on post that meet our standards.

One of the other groups I work with is @greetersguild, they are a group similar to newbieresteemday, recently formed also to provide help, understanding and education on how steemit works. In fact it was through the guild that I found your post, courtesy of a the link to your post that @smylie2005 left.

You indicated you would like help on your post and advise. You need to make some paragraph separations. This is pretty simple to do, all you need to do when formatting your post is to use the enter key a couple of times to make a blank line, as I have done.

This makes reading the longer parts a bit easier. You made some very nice choices in the photos you chose to use, and they seemed to fit the parts you were talking about, that is good. So often I will see a completely unrelated photo, because someone once told the poster that they need pictures in their post. You did it right.

There is a very large group of spanish speaking people on steemit, so dual posting in both languages may get you a lot more followers, and votes. With that being said, and to avoid issues with @cheetah bot, and @steamcleaners, you should put a link in the second one to the translated post. an example would be at the end of this post add the line:
Original Language Post- - https://steemit.com/introduceyourself/@redencion123/una-pequena-historia-de-como-fui-forjado-espero-sea-de-su-agrado - - -
or something similar. You could even go back and edit the original post to a link to the english version, that way if a photograph caught a persons eye they may see the link to the english version.

I think I will end it there, let me know if you would like more information, And also the number of people that speak spanish in our discord chat room is growing, I am not sure which ones all speak it, but we do have a few.