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RE: A Sweet Tale from This Side of the Map
He narrated it like a literary tale, adding such charm and depth that it felt like poetry.
I've done that with cook books before to the-(now)7yo-gorilla 😆He would bring me a book and ask me to read it and it would be a cup cake recipe book. It's amazing how interesting something can sound if you try 😉
The way you say it...
"He tilted his head slightly, trying to look away.
"Please… tie your hair," he murmured. "I keep forgetting what I’m trying to say."
On the contrary:
He tilted his head slightly, trying to look away.
"Please… tie your hair," he murmured. "I keep forgetting what I’m trying to say." (Because your hair is sticking in my nose).
The second version fits my husband!