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RE: A Sweet Tale from This Side of the Map

in WORLD OF XPILAR13 days ago (edited)

focus on what's important

That’s actually the heart of it... The urdu part!
If you understood Urdu, you’d realize—it’s a love story wrapped in the process of making mithai.

What inspired me to write this post was my husband reading the printed message out loud. But it wasn’t just that—it's the way he read it. He narrated it like a literary tale, adding such charm and depth that it felt like poetry.

I'm a bit disappointed by this. I was hoping that these would be "happy sweets" laced with something "special" to make me happy.

SPECIAL

😂🤣

You, of course, caught the message between the lines. Only someone like you could truly grasp the intent. Special but oh NOT so special. 😆 Thanks God!

Thank you for taking the time to read this little piece of mine. It may not have had much to offer—just my own emotions, tied to something as simple as a box of sweets... Hihi

If that's what the sweet shop looks like, it's nothing like any sweet shop I've ever seen!

Yessssss.... It does have a totally different vibe!!!

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 12 days ago 

He narrated it like a literary tale, adding such charm and depth that it felt like poetry.

I've done that with cook books before to the-(now)7yo-gorilla 😆He would bring me a book and ask me to read it and it would be a cup cake recipe book. It's amazing how interesting something can sound if you try 😉

 12 days ago 

It's amazing how interesting something can sound if you try 😉

The way you say it...

"He tilted his head slightly, trying to look away.
"Please… tie your hair," he murmured. "I keep forgetting what I’m trying to say."

On the contrary:

He tilted his head slightly, trying to look away.
"Please… tie your hair," he murmured. "I keep forgetting what I’m trying to say." (Because your hair is sticking in my nose).


The second version fits my husband!