You are viewing a single comment's thread from:
RE: HWC-story01 : The Shadow of Deception
Hello respected @artist1111
I liked your story, you have portrayed Faizan's character very well, and this dialogue
"Faizan's mask was torn. His face was red with anger. "So what if I am not Raja? This family ruined his wealth. I deserve this life."
In this I see his frustration as well as some reality.
But no matter how clever the criminal is, some mistake of his gets him caught.
Thank you for sending a beautiful story.