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RE: Sex and other Per(versions)- Bachelor party...
Here's the critic brigade...
I had a look at the title what does it mean: Sex and Other Per? What is per, prrrr?
Why all the dots before and after the lines you wrote? What does it mean?
The book cover you show is not the best one. You got something else since it looks like a draft including the lines where it will be cut.
Did you score wearing that smelling suit or did no one care the bride included? It's good to read something else instead of the same old stories wich make me wanna run out and scream.
#comment okay, I did it, please, don't reply I can't handle commenting them as well, @wewrite enough and I have a shared keyboard (not for gaming).
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What seems good for some cultures is not so good for others. Those robotic translators don't help much either. The title appears in parentheses because it means you could choose between SEX AND OTHER PERVERSIONS. OR SEX AND OTHER VERSIONS. It's a little-used pun. No BITCH.
As for the periods, I use them as form. To create the sensation of time. Between one action and another. In Latin America it works. They could be blank spaces.
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Then what is the Spanish Version since the English isn't good, can it be translated in a different way? Or actually it should be (per)Versions didn't hefestus tell you that?
So the title of this one is:
Sex and other (per)Versions- Bachelor party...
although "other"' sounds a bit weird too