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RE: The sound of my heart

in Freewriters15 days ago

What is worse is that victims are close to bankruptcy. There are who sell their house, care, take loans to pay to a scammer. Finding out you are fooled, abused and there's no way out is what is the worst.

You made a good start if it comes to writing a poem.
I like to ask you to read it again and see if there's a part you like to edit.

Welcome in the world of poetry. Don't forget to write a review about a short film. Did you try Steem Atlas?

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No, I liked this poem according to the point. Is there anything in this poem that I should change?

No, I have just written a review of a short film, which I will post today after I catch up on my sleep. After that, it is the turn of steem Atlas.

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 14 days ago 

You are easy satisfied with what you write.... I still edit what I wrote even text of years ago.