The sound of my heart
There was a stop in the beautiful bridge of life
Who threw pebbles in this stop
The one who wanted to ruin life did it
Better than ruining it, it would have been better if he had given poison
Why do people play with innocence
Toys are there to play with
The customs of this world are a bit strange
Here, happiness is celebrated by killing someone.
Beautiful dreams are shown
Smiles are stolen
All the tricks of catfish
Faces are hidden
Stay away from the world of the net
Emotions are buried here
We cannot bear the severity of the situation
Catfish has put many masks on the face
Cc:- @aneukpineung78 @wakeupkitty
You may have understood my purpose for using this image. If not, let me tell you my thoughts.
When we think that our destination is right and we start walking on the same path, we do wrong.
People who cheat in love, who also hide their identity, mislead us by showing us light. And they make our destination not light but darkness.
Catfish hunting has a very negative impact on a person's self-confidence and self-esteem.
What is worse is that victims are close to bankruptcy. There are who sell their house, care, take loans to pay to a scammer. Finding out you are fooled, abused and there's no way out is what is the worst.
You made a good start if it comes to writing a poem.
I like to ask you to read it again and see if there's a part you like to edit.
Welcome in the world of poetry. Don't forget to write a review about a short film. Did you try Steem Atlas?
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No, I liked this poem according to the point. Is there anything in this poem that I should change?
No, I have just written a review of a short film, which I will post today after I catch up on my sleep. After that, it is the turn of steem Atlas.
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You are easy satisfied with what you write.... I still edit what I wrote even text of years ago.
I hope I will never be trapped by the catfisher's seduction, it's terrible when the intention is to start a relationship (whether love or lust), then slowly all resources are dredged up. It's a subtle form of mining, with a good photo and sweet words, then the prey is caught and left breathless.
Do you have any experience of catfishing happening to friends or family?
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No, thank God, I or my family have no such experience. When the weekly topic came, I did some research on it.
I think these were things of the old days. Nowadays, people have become quite conscious and no one can be fooled by anyone except those who lack education, or those who want to jump into the abyss blindly.
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Upvoted! Thank you for supporting witness @jswit.
@aneukpineung78 @wakeupkitty
I will give this poem of mine a 8 out of 10. This is my first poem in free writing and I hope that my attempt at writing a poem has not gone in vain. Today, my heart was not in the mood to write a story. Suddenly, the idea of a poem came to my mind and my pen started running on the register.
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you mad a good start. See my other comment. Well done!
There is always room for improvement. Check the final points. A poem is precision. It is beauty. Stay away from assonance. Even in the misnamed free verse, there are rules. For your first poem, it's fine. Let it sit for a while, write and come back to it. You'll see there's always room for improvement.
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