Your criminal story seems perfect to me, it kept me in suspense from beginning to end with the natural essence of a story of this nature, every minute my uncertainty increased to know what was behind the murder of the healer and even though Cruz's attitude left a lot What to wish for, the police conduct seemed even more suspicious to me.

What things don't. Don't you think it's outrageous that corruption is everywhere?

Great closing with the blank paper play, I'll be thinking about it until I remember. I applaud your participation.

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