You have a story, it's an interesting story, that you could develop. You left me tied to the computer. I thought the whole rescue, the screaming, the firemen, the tears, the near death and the rescue, the petting of the dog. I was expecting a lot from this story, can you flesh it out? Lots of plot to include and enjoy. I was shocked by some close repetitions of some words.
Don't stop writing.
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I did? I was not expecting that. Especially, given the fact that this was a part of a contest. So, it was not really a freewrite. But, someone has given the picture. So, I am limited with some context.
The rescue thing came along the way, while I was writing. So, I changed what I was writing because, it felt like it was more interesting to write about that.
The repetitions... Ummm.. That could because I was lacking some words. XD
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jj. I just found what you wrote good. Which left me wanting you to develop a bigger story. It's a good argument. And every text is a free expression.
The rescue came up while I was writing. So I changed what I was writing because I found it more interesting to write about.
That's the interesting thing, that you have the ideas. The writer's fiber. It's just starting to write and the words are coming to you.
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I am writing frequently now (I mean more frequent since the start of the SEA program).
I will take that as a compliment. Thanks =D
By the way, if you want to quote something that someone wrote, you can use (>) symbol which will put it in a nicer way.
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