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RE: Berjudi dengan nyawa (Ind-Esp) Apostando la vida

in Steem SEA2 days ago (edited)

I have written a post about how to tidy up a writing on Freewiters community. I do hope to see your entry more neatly visually. I mean, you write good stories, please give a little more effort to make it more comfortable for the prospective readers to enjoy it. https://steemit.com/freewriters/@aneukpineung78/2-simple-tips-for-tidying-up-your-writing-on-steem-en-2-tips-sederhana-merapikan-tulisan-anda-di-steem-id

Thanks. 😀

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Selamat pagi, sayang @aneukpineung78
Jika saya mengerti maksud Anda, maka format visualnya akan terlihat seperti ini. Selalu menarik untuk dipelajari dan menjangkau audiens, cukup luas untuk dikenal di garis lintang mana pun. Itulah yang dimaksud dengan seni. Untuk melintasi batasan tertentu dan meninggalkan pesan seperti kepingan salju yang ringan, unik, tetapi bersama-sama membentuk lapisan cahaya dan harapan yang indah.
#miner-wewrite #wewrite #comment

 2 days ago 

Terima kasih, @almaguer. Sekarang tulisan Anda terlihat lebih estetik dan nyaman di mata. Seperti biasa, saya suka tulisan Anda. Fiksi yang cenderung "gelap", dan narasi yang mampu mengajak pembaca menelanjangi karakter dan karenanya bisa menjadi lebih dekat dengannya. Mungkin, faktor utamanya adalah karena saya juga menyukai fiksi pada genre ini.

Terimakasih telah menulis di #miner-wewrite.

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all good, you good.

Did he tidy it up, since I can't tell the difference?
It would be good if also English is spoken since those who don't feel comfortable posting and commenting.

 2 days ago (edited)

Yes, it now has whitespaces and the justify alignment. Hey, @almaguer, I am with @wakeupkitty, better if it's in English or has English section. You can get rid of Indonesian and just put English section in the next posts. Trust me, some parts or this post of yours and the comment you made in Indonesian are grammatically wrong, and some look funny, even though I think I know what you mean.

Thanks that would be helpful. It's a good service he offers but there's no need to. I'm glad the text looks better. I thought the white spaces were visible before?