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RE: WEDNESDAY'S FREEWRITE; PROMPT OF THE DAY: LEERING
It is a shame that the time was up ! Your story was drawing me in. Very clever freewrite. I am sure that @mariannewest is very proud of your work!
Who was that woman leering at? Was it a handsome young man? Did she just have a thing for trains? Oh, hopefully there will be a sequal to satisfy my curiosity.
Thank you for sharing your writing talents with all of us on the last #PYPT Show. Don't be a stranger! Hope to see you this upcoming Thursday!
I think that maybe that woman is the ghost of me. The strength to do the walk. She was leering at what we would all assume was the big crater but in reality it was the ghost of me leading me to explore and continue to push foreward no matter how hard it can get. The train car was a time machine to better days in the past, or future. "Pain pain, go away. Come again another day" thank you for your thoughtful words. They are much appreciated