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RE: Personal Story Slam Challenge 1 - I Have No Name and I Must Scream
Wonderful comment, I appreciate the time to list out your thoughts in detail. In a way the story was based on the way I actually did come up with the name naquoya. Not wanting all those added numbers like gmail suggest when trying to find a username for the email service.
After some thought the setting of the story appeared, with the digital hologram type environment. Just touched on, but enough for the reader to get a feel for the world and understand its connection to the name drama at its heart.
There is a split personality to the story, in a way. Deliberate, but hopefully not jarring. As for future competitions; yes I'm in. Now what are the rules :)
Yeah, that's what I wanted to touch on. You really established a whole universe in a brief amount of time. That takes skill, and you have it in spades, mate! I still laugh at that scene with the primary key haha It really cuts the tension so effectively.