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RE: Personal Story Slam Challenge 1 - I Have No Name and I Must Scream

in #fiction8 years ago

Yeah, that's what I wanted to touch on. You really established a whole universe in a brief amount of time. That takes skill, and you have it in spades, mate! I still laugh at that scene with the primary key haha It really cuts the tension so effectively.