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RE: Original Song- Bittersweet

in #dsound6 years ago (edited)

@bonniepiesse, these iambic pentameter verse lines of yours that turn into trochaic pentameter lines, and which have spondees joining them together, are so very poetic.

“I sit, | I wait | and I | an ti | ci pate
a change | is co | ming I | close my | eyes I
let the | ri vers | rise my | heart in | hid ing”