Original Song- Bittersweet

in #dsound • 6 years ago (edited)

Hi Everyone!

I’ve posted 3 songs from ‘Bittersweet EP’ which I released in 2013 (thanks to a great crowdfunding campaign)

So here is the final song from that, the title track (produced by Emile Kelman).

It’s a super moody, cruisy, melancholy song about how change can is… Bittersweet.

Lyrics

I sit, I wait
and I anticipate
a change is coming
I close my eyes
I let the rivers rise
my heart in hiding

and it’s bitter
it’s bittersweet

We walk alone
in kingdoms overthrown
in moments breaking
through time and space
these questions interlace
in dreams awaking

and it’s bitter
it’s bittersweet

We face fear
our stories disappear
in truth confiding
we twist, we turn
we let the bridges burn
in love colliding

and it’s bitter
it’s bittersweet
and it’s bitter
it’s bittersweet
it’s bitter
it’s bittersweet

I sit, I wait
and I anticipate
a change is coming

xo Bonnie

P.S. Here's the youtube link if you want to listen there:

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     6 years ago 

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       6 years ago 

      very relaxing song, nice

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         6 years ago 

        Very nice! Thanks for sharing!

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           6 years ago (edited)

          @bonniepiesse, these iambic pentameter verse lines of yours that turn into trochaic pentameter lines, and which have spondees joining them together, are so very poetic.

          “I sit, | I wait | and I | an ti | ci pate
          a change | is co | ming I | close my | eyes I
          let the | ri vers | rise my | heart in | hid ing”

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             6 years ago 

            HI Bonnie!! I’m so sorry I missed your message in steem chat! I have been unable to sign in for weeks and randomly today it let me!

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