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RE: STACH Short Story Contest #16: 199 words, 10SBD prize pool!

in #contest7 years ago

LIVE FREE

Ann had suffered at her last foster home, her foster mother had been a frustrated drunk but managed to hide this from the social services who of course didn't really care.

Ann usually got locked in for days whenever she upset her foster mother. Ann was also made to do all sorts of strenuous house chores leaving little or no time for her to rest or do school work.

Ann often wondered what it would cost to be free, money? sex? violence? good education? she however held on to freedom thoughts for years, imagining how and what it would be like to live free from oppression.

It finally happened on a bright Friday afternoon, what had seemed impossible became possible. Her parents had come looking for her, they were ready to fight and get custody again. Ann's heart leaped, she could finally live free.

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Go ponmilè, go!

Lol...thanks dear

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Please when is the deadline

An interesting story, hope to get the full story...

I am glad Ann's little thread of hope never snapped! What an inspiration!!

Yes...thank you sis 😀

Story is after all appropriate for contest. see what in selecters mood

This is is awesome

I love this

what had seemed impossible became possible.

Looking forward to read more.
All the best

Thank you 😀😀

what a brilliant story ....@ponmile go
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