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RE: Interactive painting contest #3: Niflheim

in #art7 years ago (edited)

Things are picking up around here. Here's my twist for this week:


Whether it took a few seconds or several aeons, he couldn't say - but Mystery Man 2 saw light in the blackness. He felt the formula suddenly making sense, but he wasn't able to make sense of it. It had taken over his subconscious thoughts, rewired his neurons, it had materialised as a natural sense of truth within himself.

But as the landscape slowly lit up, he recognized Niflheim: the realm of mist. He was close to it's far edges, he could sense the steam of creation emanating from beyond the horizon.

Had he died? No, because he still had things to accomplish. His briefcase, where was his briefcase? He must have lost it before the visions had overcome him. Maybe that was the point,maybe he really didn't need all these things.

It was time to put his newfound understanding to use.

He quickly gathered his breath and hurried calmly through the mist, onwards to the horizon.

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Impressive and extensive! Another awesome continuation, yet leaving alot to the imagination, thanks @fraenk!

(btw, you do know steemd records all edits to your comment? It shows the amount of work you've put in! Much appreciated, danke schön!)

haha, thanks... and yeah i know the edits are recorded :P

it's just that i fail to read properly while text is still in the input field and only find the small mistakes and weird wordings after posting.

I don't think there's too many posts I've ever made on steemit that haven't seen multiple small (or sometimes even extensive) edits.

edit: this comment shall not be an exception!

Hehe, nice one! I just brought it up because I thought I received 5 comments of you, when in fact it was just one, haha