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RE: They Burned - Writing Prompts Week 4

in #writingprompts6 years ago

Great story. Even though the premise was revealed you still kept some elements of surprise.
Great narrator. We can see his voice reflect his changes and experience.

His body was burned had and black and the police later called me a monster for it.

Interesting point, revealing the double standards of the time. Black men and women were lynched in the most horrible ways and no white person who participated, even as observer, thought of themselves as such.
The end itself felt like lighting!

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Hi. Thanks for reading. I think I should have spent more time editing some minor points on this story (going to do that now). Happy you enjoyed it. I wanted to show that the narrator was far from innocent, but still not guilty