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RE: Jewel of the Harem: Chapter 1 - The Capture of Mei

in #writing • 6 years ago

Thanks for the feedback. :-)
Mostly, i think the only reason the barbarian is so gentle is because Mei submitted so quickly. He shows in Chapter 2 that He can be rough, and He will show that again in Chapter 5. Most of the scenes where He is "barbaric" will be in His treatment of other men though, or of rebellious girls.
i'll check out that link you sent though.

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