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RE: Presenting: Irἵtra Veqshaxria, A Tiefling Wizard For An RPG Campaign

in #writing7 years ago

My only issue with this text is the form. It feels like a description that really wants to become a story. A fragment of a story would do.

Keep writing my love. <3

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you know I will :)