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RE: Creative Writing Challenge - Task #3 - The Disruption
Well done @flemingfarm!
Ah, I see so many things I'd like to comment.
Somehow I knew that the pergola at the very first paragraph was doomed. The decision to choose a protagonist that's not on the airplane is also refreshing.
Apart from that, aren't there any kind of insurance for people nearby airports?
Thank you.
I am not sure if home owners insurance covers airplane debris damage in the covered claims. I'm sure it would be in the fine print that it would be considered an act-of-god and therefore not covered.
The picture is from a distance of the plane so I wasn't drawn onto the plane, laser like. It was more of a trebuchet shot and I fell in between the plane and your spot. The keyword of plane can be a bit leading, so I looked more at the picture than the plane.
I liked this challenge and the free form nature of it. The only "box" is the image provided but that is the motivation.
I guess you are right about the insurance. Yeah, it's a nice approach to change the point of view an use a different protagonist.
You should see the upcoming post with the rules for Task #4. The freedom of the form will be still there.