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RE: A World Long Sundered -- Chapter 1
Hello again @saffisara! You actually found my original chapter before heavy editing haha. I kept this up here since i'm still pretty fond of it and I though people might like to compare it to a somewhat edited version. My latest chapter has all the recent links but the edited version is at
https://steemit.com/writing/@nexusfyre/a-world-long-sundered-chapter-1-1-edited-version
the most recent chapter that has all links to the other chapters is here:
https://steemit.com/writing/@nexusfyre/a-world-long-sundered-chapter-8-part-2
Thanks again for returning to my world! Cheers!
I Resteemed that link post so I can read it all
Saw a love story there to somewhere.. Lol
So much great reading ahead.
You are going to be so tired of hearing me cause you know me I never leave a post without commenting.. Lol
So you have about 7 more comments coming for you.. Hahaha 😂😂
Sorry I just couldn't help myself. I shut up now
Well, it is people like yourself that keep motivating me to write @saffisara. So I'm not complaining one bit! Thank you again for the heart you put into the steemit community. Yes, I put together a 3-part love story at the request of some friends over at the Fiction Workshop. It is a very special piece for me. It is hard to explain, but I felt almost divinely inspired to write it, as if the thoughts i was putting to paper were not completely my own. The story is called Tanabata. Here is the first link:
https://steemit.com/writing/@nexusfyre/tanabata-a-love-story-part-1
Sorry, i keep flooding you with stuff to read...
Thank you for your kind words 😊 I'm happy to be at service.. Lol
What a wonderful thing to write and I would be honored reading it sence it obviously means a lot to you 😆 I'm a love story freak and romantic movie freak so it's my kind of reading
No worries about flooding me with your work.
Just keep them coming 👍
Thank you my friend and have a wonderful day
Ahh so I did a unexpected thing there.. Lol 😆
Well then I read the original version not bad.
I really enjoyed reading it, but ok so the other one has links to the other chapters?
Yeah that could help 😉lol
You are incredible, just saying.
Funny I was just writing and saying the same thing in my other answer to you. About how happy I am to reconnect with you and se how far you have come and to be able to share your world 😊 made my day Bigtime 👍
Thank you for being you. Cheers
Yeah, the edited version is much stronger I think but lacks a bit of the detail, like the verse. I will most likely put the verse back in later though I think. I can't wait to hear your thoughts regarding the series. Feel free to offer suggestions or comments about anything! Cheers!
I will do that for sure 😉 you know me can't keep my mouth or pen chut.. Lol
I'm sure it is amazing. Cheers