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RE: [Original Novel] Metal Fever 2: The Erasure of Asherah, Part 26

in #writing6 years ago

Hahahahahaha. I liked this part. The hint of the memory of the father and of questioning his intelligence is an advance. Apocalyptic literature and anticipation, but always with humor. I'm struck by your handling of fashion and advertising. I laughed when I read it because you were so ironic about that part. I'll read to you. Until next time!!

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I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)