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RE: Be strong from your heart

in #writing7 years ago

This is an encouraging read @artcurocl21.

But you need to improve your writing a little. Break up your long paragraphs!!

That will allow the reader to catch some breath!!

Otherwise this is a motivation write.

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Thank you very much!!:)

i will keep in my mind for future post

It is ok. Starting can be a little hard, and it takes time to learn. You will acclimatize finally. Until then, steem on!