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Thanks for the feedback @mepatroit. "SDT!" Show, don't tell. Something I learned very early on in my writing career. So crucial. But it's all a learning process. As I said, being aware is half the battle. If you "don't know that you don't know," the battle is uphill all the way. You, however ARE aware. Just keep on writing...!

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Thanks, I will!