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RE: How to enchant and engage your beloved Steemit followers

in #writing7 years ago

If you can add "by zombies" to the end of a sentence, rearrange that bad boy.

LOL, can you explain that one?

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Lol of course :)

I'm referring to passive voice.

Passive- She was chased. (By zombies)
Active- The zombies chased her.

See how you can add by zombies to the first one?

If you can add 'by zombies' and it makes sense, try to change the sentence. You can't always, but you don't want too much passive voice in your writing.

Hope that explained it :)