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RE: Restless Heart, Soothing Fire - Art Prompt Writing Contest #3

in #writing7 years ago

Damn, I read this fast. The descriptions were evocative, and her thoughts were balanced by a carefully illustrated past motivation, from childhood to the day of her wedding. Fantastic.

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Thanks! I wanted to go in a little deeper into her motivations but the word limit wasn't enough. It's challenging, in its own way, to keep short stories, well, short...

I'm glad the descriptions had the intended effect! It's something I really value in fiction and I try to meet my own standards.