I saw you being mentioned in @sykochica's advice post the other day, and I couldn't help but notice she noted your formatting as well. The same one I noted in chapter one, which I hope you're going to address for the next chapters. She knows her stuff, and she has helped quite a few people here already so it's best to follow that advice.

You write nicely, and I know people are going to take notice once you put up sizable chunks. The thing with Steemit though is that you have to give to get back. Do you get what I'm saying? Time is worth more than any vote, so you better be willing to give your time to comment and support others if you want the same treatment for you. Since our minnow votes are worth very little, heartfelt comments are our only ammo to make our name more noticeable.

It's a hard road, and there are times when you would be discouraged, but just keep pushing if you want to achieve what you intend to achieve. Heck, even I haven't achieve what I set out to do, but I'm way past that hump where I'm easily discouraged, thanks in large part to @lukestokes setting me straight (nudge nudge that's why you should vote for him ;) because he really takes the time to talk to people)