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heh... yeah... weird stuff... i like the x-files :D

the lack of punctuation always made it feel like a stylistic choice there for the action-scene... also made it a tad hard to read, though!

Yeah, he will get there! :). Periods are a must.

He knows this! Hehehe and has started to add them. So it will be cool to see him growing, post after post!

Fun to look back after a year and see the changes that have made him a better writer!

I love seeing the changes in my style over the years.. literally just finished writing the sequel to Fireflies last night and I'm blown away at how good I think it came out!!!

Definitely can't say that.for my early stuff hehehe

But we all start somewhere! The passion has to be stoked and muscles worked.. just like any hobby. Hehe

Thanks for encouraging him though!!! I'm sure he will love to hear that it reminded you of x-files! That show used to make my hair stand up! 😂😂😂