You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Descriptions on the Spot: Jun 15 - Jun 22View the full contextView the direct parentanarcho-andrei (64)in #writing • 8 years ago Absolutely agree. I'm very much looking forward to see what you produce!
What about:
"He was born, into a world without limits. Yet he lived within his limitations. He died having met his limit."
Just playing. I decided to see if I could make your example more compelling and stay under 20 words with it. LOL
Updated to use the words.
"He was born, into a world without limits, destined for glory! Yet he lived a stoic life within his limitations. He died perturbed, and down for the count, having met his limit at maximum overdrive."
Best I could do on short form notice ;)