The Most Horrible Night : A Freewrite Poem.

in #wafrica6 years ago

Here, here, put it here
The shout was loud and clear
Shaking, fidgeting, slowly put it down with tears the sound from his ears hasn't disappear
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Lowly stepping, calmly set
Beauty beholding her, best dressed
They've gathered round again
Mocking and jesting of her impairment.
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Story wouldn't be told, that dark days
Deep into the night they came
Banging the door as hard as they could
Like today, they were fidgeting.
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The door went agasp, there came they
Shouting, hitting everything hard
Father was weak, mother in tears
Devil was awake that night, facing our house.
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Darkenes of the night last till date
Luggage they carry away, me they rape
Turn by turn, they took there turn
Ate of my bloody plate, I wrong in pain.
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Years have passed now, memory still the same
My fighting back and struggle got this pain
With a machete struck my ears
Till date, one of my ears became deaf.
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How very sad. A most horrible night indeed!
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Welcome to the Freewriters. But what a sad and powerful poem!! Hope that it is not a true story.

Oh lawd! I hope this is fiction. Well done love, you need to correct a few typos though.

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