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RE: [DID I FEEL THE DEATH?]

in #venezuela7 years ago

You have a minor misspelling in the following sentence:

after all this getting to an end i was just listening to their meaningless conclusions about that i shouldn't have eaten before start training (Something that i do since i started training) or to not use talcum powder on my feet (Something i did not do but you will understand why i'm telling you this) , but what happend if i told you what i saw from inside myself while i was on the floor?.
It should be what happened instead of what happend.

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oh! thanks, i'll correct it right now