Alright! Just finished reading it. :) I was actually writing my own version of certain biblical events, and you've just inspired me a bit. I love your piece. I love the way it evokes feelings. It's the way I like writings to be, to emit this sublime aura. I've tried to do this sometimes. I think you commented on one of my attempts (Black Fog - Green Fire, if I remember correctly).

Now I want to read more from this universe to see how you develop your storyline! :)