Hi @zenkly,

Thank you for your contribution. I see a little bit of improvement since the last time you contributed video tutorials.

Here are some suggestions for you:

• Try to make your outline more clear with steps that learners can follow from one point to the other. There is no transition for your learner to know when you are moving on to the next step.

• Use more instructional pointers for your learners so that they can stay focused on the point that you want to bring across.

• Right now, your level of voice is monotone meaning that it demands the learner to really concentrate to understand each word that you are saying. You can practice reading your speech into a recorder, close your eyes and listen to the recording again. Ask yourself: do I sound boring? Do I have intonation of sounds? Do I motivate students with my voice? When you ask these questions, you will then find ways to move away from monotone and make your presentation more interesting and inviting.

• Spend time to correct the grammar and flow of your written post.

Look forward to an improved presentation in your next submission.

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