Thank you for your contribution @pckurdu.
After analyzing your tutorial we suggest the following points:

• We suggest you use the third person in your tutorial.
  The tutorial becomes more professional if you use the third person instead of the first person.
  Check out some good tutorials to see the writing technique of the tutorials.

• In your tutorial we also suggest that you use paragraphs. Phrases separated by line breaks get tiring to read.

• In your last demonstration of the results of your tutorial, it was great to have a GIF. Good job.

Looking forward to your upcoming tutorials.

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