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RE: APPS FOR SELF IMPROVEMENT (PART 1)

in #utopian-io5 years ago

Hello, @cuteflames!

Thank you for your contribution. I definitely agree with you that keeping control of your finances is very important, and becoming more aware of your spending habits can help you improve your financial situation. I've never used this tool in particular, but I have to admit that it looks nice and simple to use. Thank you for taking the time to promote this tool with an informative and well-illustrated blog post.

In terms of content, I like all the information provided. The post contains useful information about the project itself, and even includes insights into your personal views and thoughts. I also like all the screenshots and images used, however I think that you forgot to cite the source of the first image. Furthermore, even though I like all the personal information provided, I have to admit that I wanted read a little bit more about your personal experiences with this tool, but the post has a fair amount of editorial content nonetheless.

That said, the post did have issues of style and proofreading, but not to the level where it hurt the reading experience. To sum up, this is a nice review, but there are areas where you can improve, and I hope this comment will help you with that.

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Thank you for your review, @lordneroo! Keep up the good work!