RE: #3 Promoting Actifit - Crossing 100K SP & My Part as Ambassador
This post covered many of Actifit's latest announcements, and it's great to see those promoted in this way. It's awesome to see the project's growth and development.
However, I really would have liked to see more unique and editorial content. Nearly all of the content in this post is available in Actifit's recent updates, as you reference in the post. It's useful to have a such a collection of updates, but I like to see more of your own experience. You do reference it, I know, but rather briefly.
And, as I usually do, I have some issues regarding style and grammar. I'm gonna give some examples.
"How is this possible that all its SP delegations are from ordinary Steemians" should be "How is it possible that all of its SP delegations are from ordinary Steemians"
"All this happens in the span of 7 weeks" should be "All of this happened in the span of 7 weeks."
"After the 100K SP, there is a new change and I will explain the new change in my next blog post when it is implemented" should be "After reaching 100K SP, this is about to change and I will explain the new system in my next blog post on the topic, when it is implemented."
Despite these issues, I enjoyed reading this post, and your message was clear. Thank you for it.
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Thank you for your review, @didic!
So far this week you've reviewed 9 contributions. Keep up the good work!
Thanks @didic for taking the time to write the review for me. This is really helpful. I thought I was very unique writing from an amabassador's view point but you are right, their updates came out even faster than mine even with my own involvement in there. Next time, I will perhaps write more of the personal benefits I gained from using the app.
I also need to learn how to write blogs with editorial content. Would be great if you can give me more specific guidelines along the way.
As for the correction of style and grammar, I really appreciate this one as I learned a lot from this and know exactly where my mistake comes from. This is definitely helping us to improve our English.
You have really done a fantastic work. I am going to use your sample here for my translation language moderators over at Davinci to look at so that they know how correcting mistakes in the open can be very constructive for the contributor.
Thank you and have a good weekend,
Rosa
Thank you for this response. I really appreciate it. The personal benefits are exactly the type of things we're looking for in a blog post from someone who isn't the app's developer. The personal insights and experiences that are unique to you.